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Thursday, June 18, 2009

Touching Story

Tagged by Widya.

Jane is a typical college girl who enjoys life to the fullest. She loves her boyfriend so much and texts him every now and then.

Mark is Jane's boyfriend who works in a call center in Los Angeles. He's always busy doing so many things. He only manage to reply to Jane's texts when he got off from work.

One time, Mark receive a message from Jane :
"Hi baby! How are u? I miss u! Call my house when u get home. Take care! I love u!"

Mark ignored the message because he always receive the same message whenever it is time for him to go home from work.

"Baby, I miss u..Did u eat yet?! Take care when u get home! I'll be waiting for ur call.. I love u!"

"Baby, where are u?! It's unfair that u don't reply to my texts... Well, I'm just gonna wait for ur call... I love u!"

Mark reaches home and lay on his bed. The last time he knew is that he's reading Jane's text. He was so tired he fall asleep and wasn't able to return Jane's call. He can still hear his phone beeps but he's too tired to take a glimpse on the message.

When he wake up next day, he remembers that he needs to call Jane. He ignored the messages and dialed to Jane. No one answering in her house. He called up her cellphone and he was surprised that her father answered the call. In his voice u can feel his tears and hear his heart tearing apart.

"Mark, why haven't u called? Jane was waiting for ur call all night!"

"Dad, I'm sorry. I fell asleep being so tired from work. I was calling ur house but no one answering. Where are u? So I can come over."

"Just meet me at Jane's house."

Mark went to Jane's house and much to his surprised he saw a lot of people inside. The house were so lighted but u can see the gloom on every persom u'll meet there. He was greeted by Jane's mom on tears. She hug him tight and cried on his shoulders.

"Jane was waiting for u. She didn't come with us because she was waiting for ur call. She was killed by robbers that broke in our house. She's gone, Mark. She's gone.."

"That's impossible...She texted me..How could this happen?!"

Mark can't look who's inside the coffin. He can't move and it feels like his whole body is stuck on the chair he's seating on. He wanted to cry but it seems that something is blocking his tears to fall down. He turned to his phone and read the messages of Jane.

"Baby, I'm not coming with my mom and dad. I'm just gonna wait for ur call."

"Baby...I'm so scared...It's seems like there's someone downstairs..Please call me now!"

"Baby...Someones here..They might kill me..please call me now, where are u? I need u here..!!"

"Baby... I love u!!"

He wanted to shout and cry so loud. It's true that Jane is waiting for his call. Up to her last breath she only thinks about him.

He stared at Jane inside the coffin. Suddenly tears starts flowing down his cheeks. He can't say anything. The only words he uttered..
"My baby, I'm so sorry! I could have known, I could have fought for u! I'm really sorry! I love u so much!"

PS.
Argh it's very touching me guys! You should read it :(

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